I had a unique experience as I read the blurb: I pictured your little comment bubbles attacking it from every side, yelling things like “Why is this sentence a freight train?”, “Who is the main character, again?”, “Why are you stealing names from other paranormal stories?”.
– Survivor of the Canary Pitch-Editing Service, upon seeing a lackluster blurb.
The Canary crew made sure to explain the reasoning behind each decision, so I could understand their process and see how to apply those concepts to improving my pitch…I’m very excited about the final product. [...] They helped me with mine and the difference was staggering. I’d been going in circles before I contacted them!
–Robin Dempsey, author of LeyLines comics.